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	<title>Comments on: er, right&#8230;</title>
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		<title>By: beth</title>
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		<dc:creator>beth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 May 2005 17:50:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi. Once again, I am coming to this entry late, but maybe you'll see this one, since you saw the last.

I'm glad you updated Marissa Ribisi's Wikipedia entry. But I think the pronoun in the last sentence is unclear. The ending reads, "Interestingly enough, according to Lermanet's guide to Beck and Scientology?(http://lermanet.com/beck/), Marissa and her brother were both delivered by Bibbe Hansen, Beck's mother. She is a scientologist." I think people might be confused about who that "She" refers to. Bibbe is the last female mentioned, so one might think you mean her, but I'm also thinking you might mean Marissa. At any rate, they are all Scientologists; you might want to say that!

beth
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<p>I&#8217;m glad you updated Marissa Ribisi&#8217;s Wikipedia entry. But I think the pronoun in the last sentence is unclear. The ending reads, &#8220;Interestingly enough, according to Lermanet&#8217;s guide to Beck and Scientology?(http://lermanet.com/beck/), Marissa and her brother were both delivered by Bibbe Hansen, Beck&#8217;s mother. She is a scientologist.&#8221; I think people might be confused about who that &#8220;She&#8221; refers to. Bibbe is the last female mentioned, so one might think you mean her, but I&#8217;m also thinking you might mean Marissa. At any rate, they are all Scientologists; you might want to say that!</p>
<p>beth</p>
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